I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia Ora Ethan I! I really like this blog post because it gives me a visual of what you have made. Maybe next time you could add a slide or a google drawing. Was this for Whakamanawa? Did we do this a day I wasn't here? Bye
This is a good blog post! Do you know how have grammar problems? I'm am not trying to be rude, but could you try not to make your words shorter? It just makes me um . . . cringy? But this really shows me that you know how to be a good person to others and I'm sure you have lots of friends with the things you know. People like being treated with respect, and you know how to show it. It's a very good quality that EVERYONE needs to have. Ka Pai!
Talofa Lava Ethan I,Acasia here Theres are some great facts for how to treat people. I Like how you have put a picture of it so it makes it more interesting. Maybe next time you could do your next step but over all this post is great! Good job Ethan I
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Kia ora Kian here i like the ideas you came up with and maybe you could explain why you have to follow those rules bye
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ethan I! I really like this blog post because it gives me a visual of what you have made. Maybe next time you could add a slide or a google drawing. Was this for Whakamanawa? Did we do this a day I wasn't here? Bye
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ReplyDeleteThis is a good blog post! Do you know how have grammar problems? I'm am not trying to be rude, but could you try not to make your words shorter? It just makes me um . . . cringy? But this really shows me that you know how to be a good person to others and I'm sure you have lots of friends with the things you know. People like being treated with respect, and you know how to show it. It's a very good quality that EVERYONE needs to have. Ka Pai!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ethan I.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about how to treat others and all the kind things you do with them which is really cool.
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Talofa Lava Ethan I,Acasia here
ReplyDeleteTheres are some great facts for how to treat people. I Like how you have put a picture of it so it makes it more interesting. Maybe next time you could do your next step but over all this post is great! Good job Ethan I