I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
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that is rely cool EthanI
ReplyDeleteHi Ethan,I'm from your class Te Rōpū Manawaroa
ReplyDeleteI like your post about Kiwi can I like the photos you have there did Miss Rasin take that because it looks like it,But anyway I enjoyed the part when you said we got 20 points! Maybe next time check your spelling and put some more info.but thats all for today so bye!
Hello Ethan I,
ReplyDeleteGood post about Kiwi Can, I liked the way you added some photos so we know more about what we did in Kiwi Can. Did you think about double-checking your spelling, because people might not know what you are writing because of your spelling. Next time you could add more words so that your post is longer. You could also add a label or what you do in Kiwi Can. But other than that you have an amazing post. Well done!
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I like the way you but the first part of the round and not the. 2 did you think about draw Kiwi can probably and not kwei can. did you think of looking back before you post?
ReplyDeletecool that you put a picture of your class you should put that picture on your mihi for your class
ReplyDeletekia ora Ethan,one thing to start of with is did you think about asking other people for help with the words
ReplyDeleteHi Ethan its me Dani love you blog post just could you fix the word kiwi can because you spelled it wrong but awesome job but you could add some more writing like why you get kiwi can or why do you like it but good job bye.
ReplyDeleteHi Ethan I This is a good blog post but maybe next time you need to let someone check your post before you post because you have a few apeeling mistakes but anyway that is great. What was your favourite part in kiwi an. Maybe for the people that don't know what kiwi can I you can go back and edit and maybe explain what kiwi can is? Well that is all from me , Bye
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ReplyDeleteHi Ethan,I'm from Owairaka school
I like your post about Kiwi can I like the photos you have there. Did you take that because it looks like it,But anyway I enjoyed the part when you said you got 20 points! Maybe next time check your spelling and put some more info.but thats all for today so bye BLOG YOU LATER
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ReplyDeletethis is Amazing! because.. when l really your post l learnt if you could it a cool one
kia ora, Milla here from Gilberthorpe school, I liked the way about that you have added some photos in kiwi can, Did you think about adding some more information? maybe next time you could take a look at your writing ? Well done have a good day.
ReplyDeletei like that you got thes fots of kiwcan. from lukas
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ethan.I Chelsea here
ReplyDeleteI was looking at your blog and I saw this!
I like how you put writing about what you did to get 20 points! Also good job for getting 20 / 20! Next time can you write kiwi instead of kwei? Also put more writing about why you did this? Keep up with the good blog posts! blog ya latter!
Kia Ora Ethan, I think you should maybe say what games you played or what you did? Make sure you have your spelling right but anyway great job! What is your favourite part in kiwican? Well that's all from me Bye!
ReplyDeleteHi, it's Hunter here, just checking your blog out. I like how you put in pictures of kiwi can. This reminds me of every wednesday because we have kiwi can every wednesday. Some advice is to work on your spelling. That's all from me BLOG YOU LATER!!!!
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