I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora ethan I it is lacie. Great job on this maybe next time write a we bit more and maybe next time you should use spell check because I seen some spelling mistakes.
Kia ora Ethan I, Zoey here. Your blog post is really nice and all and I see that you put a bit of effort into it but I agree with the others. You need to work on your blog posts. Blog U Later...
こんにちは it means hello in Japanese. I see you have not read you sentence out because it does not make sense to me. Next time can you put more description in your story. bye for now.
Hi Ethan I Safiyya here, I love that you said what you like to play. Next time see if it is relevant to learning or something that happened during the holidays but for now keep it and make sure it makes sense please? Bye for now.
Hi Ethan, it's Hunter here just checking out your blog. I like how you have told us what you are doing. This reminds me of the many times we play soccer. Some advice is to check your spelling because it is pretty hard to read it. That's all from me BLOG YOU LATER!!!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora ethan I it is lacie. Great job on this maybe next time write a we bit more and maybe next time you should use spell check because I seen some spelling mistakes.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Shikarn here. Awesome job on this story I agree with lacie and also you needs to make sense otherwise awesome job.
ReplyDeleteBlog you later.
Kia ora Ethan I, Zoey here.
ReplyDeleteYour blog post is really nice and all and I see that you put a bit of effort into it but I agree with the others. You need to work on your blog posts.
Blog U Later...
こんにちは it means hello in Japanese.
ReplyDeleteI see you have not read you sentence out because it does not make sense to me. Next time can you put more description in your story. bye for now.
Hi Ethan I Safiyya here,
ReplyDeleteI love that you said what you like to play.
Next time see if it is relevant to learning or something that happened during the holidays but for now keep it and make sure it makes sense please?
Bye for now.
Hi Ethan, it's Hunter here just checking out your blog. I like how you have told us what you are doing. This reminds me of the many times we play soccer. Some advice is to check your spelling because it is pretty hard to read it. That's all from me BLOG YOU LATER!!!
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