I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Bloggings Ethan I am Luke from Owairaka school That sounds like a good book Would read it if i had it Pls work on your spelling cause in parts i couldn't understand you Blog you later luke
Hi, Ethan I really like your photo on your blog. The book also looks interesting but I think next time you should add some more writing so we could know a little bit about the book. What did you like about this young Samurai. Maybe next time you could reread before you are publishing. Why did this book interest you and what do you like about it?
Hi Ethan I like how you have put a image why do you like the book? You could put little bit more information about the book. What do you like about the young samurai. Cheers Saia
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Bloggings Ethan I am Luke from Owairaka school That sounds like a good book Would read it if i had it Pls work on your spelling cause in parts i couldn't understand you
ReplyDeleteBlog you later luke
Hi,
ReplyDeleteEthan I really like your photo on your blog. The book also looks interesting but I think next time you should add some more writing so we could know a little bit about the book. What did you like about this young Samurai. Maybe next time you could reread before you are publishing. Why did this book interest you and what do you like about it?
Hi
ReplyDeleteEthan I like how you have put a image why do you like the book?
You could put little bit more information about the book. What do you like about the young samurai.
Cheers
Saia