I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia Ora Ethan. I like your blog post about your prototec. You did good on it. Maybe next time you could add capital letters, explain what you are doing, and you could add a bigger picture?
Kia Ora Ethan I it is Lacie here. I like you blog post about prototec. Maybe next time you could add what prototec is and also put a link to prototec on your blog. What is your next step?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia Ora Ethan.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about your prototec. You did good on it. Maybe next time you could add capital letters, explain what you are doing, and you could add a bigger picture?
Blog you later.
kia ora its gemeve
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the part when you showed the picture
Did you think about putting more thing to it
Why did you put this on your blog
Kia Ora Ethan I it is Lacie here.
ReplyDeleteI like you blog post about prototec.
Maybe next time you could add what prototec is and also put a link to prototec on your blog.
What is your next step?