I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Ethan its Leon from st bernadettes school. All that description has been done well. Next time I hear fireworks I will cover my ears because you said bangs are loud. Next time try putting all your description all into one page.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Ethan its Leon from st bernadettes school.
ReplyDeleteAll that description has been done well.
Next time I hear fireworks I will cover my ears because you said bangs are loud.
Next time try putting all your description all into one page.