I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Ethan. I am glad to see you have posted your helping hands activity to your blog. You use the words, be nice, quite a lot. I wonder if you could give more specific explanations of what being nice actually means and looks like. Also, check how your text looks to your audience and adjust it so it is clear and easy to read.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Ethan.
ReplyDeleteI am glad to see you have posted your helping hands activity to your blog. You use the words, be nice, quite a lot. I wonder if you could give more specific explanations of what being nice actually means and looks like.
Also, check how your text looks to your audience and adjust it so it is clear and easy to read.
Hi its Ethan this is good but next time you can make with more wrting so i know what it means.
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