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Thursday 29 August 2019

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Hi my name is ethan i was in world war 1 it was scary   all u hear will be gun shots bombs evey were then one of my best friend maddock  he got in to gun fight then he run up amd kick him so hard then hit him then he run to cover cause gun shots were to him so i run of to him the we run we shot at them then we hit the run down to the beach we were mean to take it of cause they run and take of paris so well kill.

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