I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Ethan. I can see that you have worked really hard on this and have shared quite a bit of information that you have been learning. I think some pictures of what you have shared about would help make this more interesting to look at, especially the creepy sea creatures you mentioned.
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Kia ora Ethan.
ReplyDeleteI can see that you have worked really hard on this and have shared quite a bit of information that you have been learning.
I think some pictures of what you have shared about would help make this more interesting to look at, especially the creepy sea creatures you mentioned.